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Yeah, I redid the lines. And I changed the direction of his head, like one viewer was quick to point out. (Thanks, dude, I forgot your name already ... gomen ... )

Going by Yukina's age, Laura is 13 here.
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~BlackAeronaut Oct 5, 2006
Hmm. Too bad she doesn't have much skills... But then, my guy never did during his first days as a 'borg... had to be on an extremely low-power body until he got his bearings.

Anywho, this looks much better than the first one. Nice job.
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~Fusionist-MV Sep 14, 2006   Traditional Artist
this is a lot better! but how did you edit the head like that?
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*ArtWithoutPrediction Sep 15, 2006  Professional Artist
I just drew it again on another piece of paper, scanned it, and went over it again in Flash with the pen tool, since I was re-inking the entire piece anyway.

I generally have 3 redos for every picture: thumbnail sketches on every scrap of paper unlucky enough to cover my desk, a digital sketch, and then a digital clean-up/inking session.
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~Fusionist-MV Sep 15, 2006   Traditional Artist
really? I wouldn't take the time to make three redos of a picture but it sounds like it works
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*ArtWithoutPrediction Sep 16, 2006  Professional Artist
It depends on what kind of level you are at in your art. You will find that as you improve, sometimes more work is required not less.
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~Fusionist-MV Sep 16, 2006   Traditional Artist
I need to find more time to practice then
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*ArtWithoutPrediction Sep 16, 2006  Professional Artist
Don't be like me .... don't put ALL your free time into your projects, or you'll regret neglecting your friends and family later.
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*Seiryuga Sep 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
YAY! much better....D: although it would've been uberly cool to have her do an elbow shot and a knee shot at the same time :D
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~Twinsnake-Coatl Sep 14, 2006
She must be a very strong kid in order to deliver such a damaging blow to a grown man. Not to mention he's a soldier. Any reason for this?
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*RedWingsDragon Sep 14, 2006
Great work here
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